If I would be the writer of the Iliad I will change the part were Paris fights Menelaus. I will change the events were in the ending of the story will have a great effect. First, the death of Paris were Menelaus wants and also his wife Helen. Second, the death of Paris makes the two Goddess satisfied who have a anger with the Troy. So the great war will ends in a death of one who brings war to save many lives either it is a Trojans of Greeks. Here now we will learn in this story that every decision we have made, we must face the consequence even it is good or bad.
Here now the flow of the story.
Paris draw the first arrow to shot in Menelaus's eye but suddenly Menelaus dodge the arrow. Then the sword fight begins, and when Menelaus strikes the legs of Paris and fell down in his knees, now Menelaus will strike the chest of Paris heart but Paris trick him by using a sand and throw in Menelaus's face. So Paris has a advantage to kill him, and he injured Menelaus and almost kill him. But when Paris tough he can kill him in the last strike, Menelaus dodge that attack and strikes Paris back and hit the heart of Paris. Even Aphrodite tries to save Paris still he cannot cure him because of the last hit of Menelaus. In that death, Menelaus now gets his wife Helen. And the two Goddess Athena and Hera are now satisfied in that death. Because of the death of Paris, the war between the two great countries is now end. Hector's life, Patroclus's life, Achilles's life and many more lives have been save in that death that brings a Great war between Trojans and Greeks. In that case the Troy will never fall and the two countries have peace for eternity.
Tuesday, November 2, 2010
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